ARCHIVE 248 – FOUR DESIGN ELEMENTS (MONO)
September 23, 2016 2 Comments
This is an immature bird, as shown by its very speckled plumage. It was hatched last summer.
Its a simple shot of a bird overhead, but it has four conscious design elements. First, use of black and white removes any distractions due to colour, rendering the image “basic and without frills”. Then second, this simplicity has been enhanced by rendering the sky completely featureless and white – its the bird and nothing but the bird.
But while it may be the bird and nothing but the bird, its not the whole bird. Because as it shot overhead, I failed to perfectly track it and my shot cuts right through its left wing tip. But, just by pure chance, the amputated end of the wing fits right into the frame’s lower left corner. So, thirdly, there is a strong design element – the image’s strongest graphic element – emanating from that lower left corner, and cutting diagonally right up across the frame. There are two possibilities here – either this diagonal is headed from lower left to upper right, or vice versa. Feeling my eyes entering this image – as they do most images (see earlier posts on this blog) – from the left towards the right, I’m happier with the left to right movement.
And there is also the argument that this diagonal is not moving at all.
And the fourth element is its torso, which cuts at a right angle, right through that diagonal. This torso reminds me of a dart, with a sharp point at the front and feathered flights at the rear. This being so, this second diagonal is moving from upper left towards lower right.
A further simplification of this image could be achieved by making it a silhouette, but I’m retaining its intricate plumage patterns.
D800 with 70-300 Nikkor lens at 300mm; 400 ISO; Silver Efex Pro 2’s Film Noir 3 preset.